What I don’t like
I have to point out two things
The hair isn’t very bad but it does seem to be your weakest point in this picture. Also tough the short shorts look great but the way you did the lighting is inconsistent with the top pieces of her outfit.
What I do like
I like the whole thing actually. Her hat is awesome, she has a great figure, the guns were done particularly nicely, the skin is vary toned and even with great lighting, the jacket is ornate and classy, and the expression in face is perfect.
All in all great picture